Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, June 20, 2018
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Hi Maddox,
ReplyDeleteGreat Blog I really enjoyed reading it because I didn't know much about about music but this has really opened me up about how fun music is. However next time I would sugest making sure that your 2 colours arn't the same because otherwise people will sturggle to read this amazing blog. Overall though amazing blog and I hope you keep up the good work.
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ReplyDeleteHi Maddox I really like how you have a title and something to improve. maybe not have such bright colours and add full stops at the end and i like how you have heaps of facts.
Hello Maddox, I really like how you have displayed out this home work challenge, Maybe next time center the image of the New Zealand Music month. What was your favorite part of making this homework challenge.
ReplyDeletegood work Maddox i like how you have given the person that's reading that this music is only in new zeland. so great work Maddox
ReplyDeleteKIA ORA Maddox
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have put something out so the world cane see.I was wondering why did you post this piece of writing?. And I love how you did this set out. Thank you Emily